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[Twisted Minds Ep. 1]

I'll give you a 4/5 for the effort.

It was good for the most part. I liked the control bar at the top. That was a nice touch. But the voicework was kind of shoddy, and the character animations were somewhat sloppy. The flashbacks were also not very well defined as to where they began and ended, so it created some unnecessary confusion.
Also, when Mark gets his arm cut off, and he turns around, he's simply flipped horizontally, so his remaining arm effectively switches sides, remaining the farthest one from the camera.
Still, it was fairly funny, and you made a whole movie. I can't give this a low score because you clearly worked hard on it and didn't simply slap it together. So, for your hard work, I present you with a 4/5. Just work on those flaws for next time.

Triple-Elemental responds:

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you didn't just say I didn't like it but instead gave us some constructive criticism to work with. I agree, the voices aren't the best because of timing confusions and stuff, and I didn't even notice the Mark arm thing. We'll try to work on those things for the next one. The flashbacks, we tried to add a whoosh sound to each one but we didn't add one when they went back, we'll also do that in the next one.
Thanks for watching!

[MGS- The action button]

It passes... barely.

Really, this was a rather lame and half-assed attempt at a flash, with no decent sound, MS Paint-like graphics, bad tweening, and tired jokes. Just be happy you're even getting a 2/5 from me.

FlamingMoose responds:

.........right? I don t know what MS stands for..... the tweening was smooth, and the jokes are new and never used so they rn t tired. lol I am happy with a 2/5 I guess? and only the soudn was half-assed! Im gonan guess you haven t play metal egar solid. Its for more fans of the game otherwise the humour isn t that great. But thansk for the review anyways XD

[The Random]

Good job.

Nice FBFing there. And plenty of random events to entertain me. But did you realize that there is a message that says Merry Christmas at the end of the flash? Just something you might wanna cut off, seeing as it's not exactly in season.

vorDo responds:

yea well :P i wanted to add to the randomness and just put there the first thing that poped into my skull :)

and yes i noticed it... i put it there >:)

[The Virginia Tech Tragedy]

It doesn't strike me as a serious flash.

I felt that the flash did not have as serious a tone as it should have. Instead of being mournful and sad, it was more like an action thriller, due to there being a gunpoint scene, as well as the "REST IN PEACE" message being in bright colors. So, if I had the resources, I would make a memorial flash such as this slower, using only dark colors, using no abrupt cuts, and having a slow orchestral string piece accompanying it. I feel that that would convey a more fitting mood for the recent disaster.

ThePhrozenPhoenix responds:

Thank you for suggestions. I only got Flash recently so I'm no pro at it. You are probably right about adding the slow orchestral music but I felt it would be more respectful to make it silent (I was wrong, and I may update this later with the music.) The R.I.P. thing was in bright colors to symbalise Heaven, though.

[Eggmans Prank 3]

Couldn't help but laugh.

But I have to tell you, apart from humor, this flash is seriously lacking. Having almost no animation and barely audible voices brings down the score of the whole package.

DMKProductions responds:

It's a sprite flash