videogamer0810's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mastermind 3]

Excellent as usual.

However, I think you should know that, in certain scenes, the console vanishes. You probably should fis that if you plan to re-upload this. Other than that, I loved it. I especially enjoyed the reference to the first episode with the walking pair boobs.

The-Swain responds:

Do you mean at certain angles? (like from far away) I was very careful about that, as I hate making additions to old scenery, and I just checked now and the console doesn't, in fact, disappear at any point but the end when it goes back down. Also, when looking through the monitor at the Mastermind we don't see the console, because that's where the camera is.

[VNC southpark parody]

Good... for just an intro.

The music finishes 5 seconds before the animation ends, though.

Brihi24 responds:

yea. its just a beta.
thanks man tho.

[Let's Walk]

Umm... wow.

That was... very odd. I don't really know what to say about this except... nice job? A very surreal experience, to say the least. The tweening was a little rough, but well done for a 10+ hour project. The whole package is indescribable, but in a good way.

(Man, I think I'm going to have some fucked up dreams after watching this.)

Soundshifter responds:

well thx for your input and analysis. much appreciated :)

[Zelda: Navi's Advice]

The audio quality is not great.

And since the flash relies entirely on a dialogue-based joke, this is a debilitating flaw. The background music makes it almost impossible to hear Navi talking. Then, when the music cuts out, Navi starts talking in a demonic voice which is almost impossible to understand.
On top of all this, the entire flash is only about 15 seconds long, so there's nothing particularly memorable about this flash. I gave you a 2/5 because you made some effort, but you have to make your flashes a lot longer if you want to stand out from the crowd. Or, if you prefer to make one-joke flashes like these, you have to make absolutely sure that the delivery of the punchline is perfect.

PossiblyClever responds:

Yeah, I know the audio isn't perfect, but it is only my second flash animation. I'll be sure to make improvements in later submissions.

[A Few Hundred Lives]

I don't get it.

I just don't understand the joke. If it's an inside joke, then maybe you need to take the time to explain it to the rest of us. In terms of pacing, the text lingered on the screen way too long, and the whole thing felt rather sluggish. Also, towards the end, the movie becomes extremely slow and choppy. Maybe you should fix these playback problems and resubmit an updated version or something.

Elite-Sniper responds:

BURN IN HELL MOTHERFUCKER GO SUCK YOUR DAILY LOAD OF PRISON COCK AND DIE IN A ROTTING COFFIN YOU BASTARD'S BITCH! YOU ARE JUST A BIOLOGICAL MISTAKE, I DIDN'T WEAR A RUBBER WHEN PUNISHING YOUR MOTHER. FUCK YOU MOTHERFUCKER! BURN IN HELL! Fuck you spammer! Keep your bullshit off of newgrounds!

[Random Flash II]

It's a shame it's not funny.

Randomness does not automatically equate to hilarity? Who knew?

The problem is, without any sort of context, like a Yu-Gi-Oh episode or such, randomness is not funny. It just fails when it stands alone. So next time, find some TV episode, movie clip, or the like, and base all of your randomness off of that. Trust me, the result will be much funnier.

RiceMonkey responds:

So, you mean like a parody? Or like Robot Chicken? With like tiny little stories to go along with them... hmmm, I might try that in III (if I make it) Thanks for your time! :)

[whopper freakout]

Not bad.

You shoud've let "Through the Fire and Flames" continue playing until the end.
Also, the flash zooms in when you hit "Replay".

Nice first, though.

UnderARock responds:

Yeah, I shouldve if I didnt want that scream in there, but it woulda saved me some trouble. :)
I was too lazy to fix the replay, but definatly something ill not let happen on my next one.

[Our Aeipathy]

What just happened here??

This movie did not convey a coherent story, let alone 3 million words. I have no idea what the plot was supposed to be. All I got was: some bad people came in and wanted to kill a father and son. They escaped, the boy finds something which turns him into a monster, the father snaps him out of it, and the bad woman walks into the room. Seriously, WTF?

But since you obviously tried to make a good flash, I'll give you a 2/5 for the effort. Not blammable, but not great either.

skarl3tte responds:

Sorry, I should have explained that it is part of another story thing, so most people here on NG won't understand it. but i should have made it more clear, you're right. It's partly because I got lazy and I knew I wouldn't get a chance to work on it again for maybe a month or so because of school (it's my 1st year of high school and I'm not doing so good) and I wanted to get it done.

and the 3 million words thing was just a joke. =P

Thank you, all critique is helpful. =]

[Blockhead Ghostmas]

Every episode is better than the last.

This is no exaggeration. It seems like the latest episode is always the funniest until you post the newest one. I loved the extremely fast pacing of this one. It was so random, and yet still had a coherent plot, despite the amount of switching back-and-forth between morning and night.

Not like you need the compliments.

The-Swain responds:

I only wish that were true, but it still makes me happy to see that some people think so. Thanks!

[13 Halloween Tips -Tip 01]

Very nice animation.

It was a bit short, so I couldn't give it the maximum score. But a very nice job, nevertheless.

remyzero responds:

Thank you!